Arielle's Writing Learning Story

In writing I have been learning to . . . 
Use descriptive language to describe the character, 
I am still learning to make my writing interesting and entertaining 
I try to paint a picture inside the reader head and so the reader can understand my story.

 I can use adjectives, similes , phrases,metaphors and more. . 
 When I am reading I get good ideas from my own book and that's one way that I can make my writing more better. 

I think first before I write my story an to upgrade my ideas and plan my thinking to put in my own writing story.

In Writing we have been learning about war so our teacher Mrs Ardelle  said we had to do a conscription story about the war here is Example: As I heard knocking on the door ,it was like drum beats.  I gently walk up to the door. My hands were nervously shaking on the handle, When I open the door I see a post man standing in front of me, with his rusty old bike. He hands me a letter that came from the army. I wonder who its from as I read it, I then fall to my knees. One tear comes down and then another like a tap dripping from the sink in a bath room.

It's about how I am a mother and my only son goes to war here is an example of when we are talking together:He asked, “Mother why are you crying?” As I answer him, “Your name was drawn out of the ballot, you're going to war.” As I cried, “ Please don’t leave me I beg you, please don't leave us, me and your sister we need you, you're the only thing we have, please don't go.” Then son replied sternly to mother, ”Mother let go I'm going to be all right I promise I will come back home as soon as possible

I can also learn from other people's writing and summarise it in to my own ideas to make it better  and more exiting. The kind of writing I'm in to is diary's and sad story's.